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Our empty cups signalled that it was time to move.1Interludes like this 2passed too quickly. Seated across from me, 3Eva ran her finger around the chocolate froth on the rim of her cup. 4She oozed pleasure 5as she smacked 6her violet-tinged 7lips together. 8

“Will you pay our bill?” I asked.9She scrunched up the notes and coins I placed in front of her. 10

“Will do.” she repliedtracing the espuma that had long since dried. Ever since we had attended the tea and coffee fair

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